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harsh words and violent blows
hidden secrets nobody kinows
eyes arew open, hands are fisted
deep inside im warped and twisted
so many tricks and so many lies
to many "whens" and to many "whys"
nobodys special, nobodys gifted
im just me warped and twisted
sleeping awake and chocking on a dream
listening loudly to a silent scream
call my mind the numbers unlisted
lost in someone so warped and twisted
on my knees, alive but dead
look at the invisible blood ive bled
im not gone, my mind has just drifted
dont expect much, im warped and twisted
burnt out, wasted, empty, and hollow
todays just yesterdays tomorrow
the sun died out, the ashes sifted
but im still here warped and twisted
well this isnt one of my best but read it and tell me what you think, ok, thanx
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yusufalam Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
This isn't your work!! This a Pakistani song from the movie Khuda kay liye!! You're saying you bloody wrote it?? huh!
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devilsrose666 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually yes I did right this a long time ago. How dare you come on here accusing me.
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Myredemption023 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2009
did u have an acc on netpoets? lol i love this poem ^^
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demonic-colector Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008
um ive sene this befor and its like my fave poem ever so not that im saying u didnt but di du really write this
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devilsrose666 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
actually yeah. a looooooong time ago.
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demonic-colector Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2008
cool im glad i finally got to meet u its a great piece
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devilsrose666 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you =]
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the-figurehead Featured By Owner May 24, 2005   Artisan Crafter
from the looks, I think it would be great as a song. They sound like lyrics for a deep and passionate song. Good work, keep it up.
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devilsrose666 Featured By Owner May 25, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanx, I didnt mean for it to be like that
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redeemerofdarkness Featured By Owner May 17, 2005  Student Photographer
nice expresions
but to many repeated phrses
but keep it up
its nice
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devilsrose666 Featured By Owner May 18, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanx for saying the truth! :hug: I knew I wanted to fix some things, oh well I dont feel like rewriting it :D
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KHJenni-Chan Featured By Owner May 14, 2005
Hey, that was good. Nice job. :D
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devilsrose666 Featured By Owner May 14, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanx
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KHJenni-Chan Featured By Owner May 15, 2005
:peace:
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