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Something must be wrong with me
with all this hurt inside,
always bursting with anger,
and never any pride.

Something must be wrong with me
if all I do is cry,
I can't stop this pain
all I want to do is die.

Something must be wrong with me
if my emotions run wild,
all this confusion does
is make me feel like a lost child.

Something must be wrong with me
with all these terrible things,
always there and never gone
depression is what it brings.

Something must be wrong with me
if I can't stop these thoughts,
all this pain does
is turn my stomach in knots.

Something is truly wrong with me
when I think there's only one way out,
"Let this pain end,"
is all my heart will shout.
UM.. i dont like describing my poems
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babyxxxkat Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2005
Nice. Youre style of writing is very emotional, i shall watch you, You write a little like me, not to brag lol, thats a complement.!lol
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devilsrose666 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanx i shall look at your gallery!! hehehe
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babyxxxkat Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2005
:XD: im gettin the hang of it lol :XD:
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devilsrose666 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
getting the hang of what?
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babyxxxkat Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2005
i dunno lol
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devilsrose666 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
lmao
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babyxxxkat Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2005
lol:XD:
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devilsrose666 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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redeemerofdarkness Featured By Owner May 17, 2005  Student Photographer
very deep i like this one
very emotional
good going
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devilsrose666 Featured By Owner May 18, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
thanx! :D its kinda like what you get out of photography
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